Dr. Kennedy O. Obohwemu
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RE: WALKING STICK?

Good imagery...

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RE: Driving In Lagos

Hilarious! ? ? ?

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RE: Literary critique of "See through" by Ikpeme Kanong

This is commendable! Well done, Maynah!

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RE: Motivational quotes

And there's a right quote for everyone! ?

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RE: quote

Sometime's? Should be 'sometimes'.

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RE: RISE TO STARDOM

Try go through standard texts to see how the setting of a play is described. It may help.

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RE: Escapades

Always be mindful of the word count. Required limit is 300-500 words. This story far exceeds that range.

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RE: WANDERLUST

You still need to work on your capitalization, punctuation & grammar...

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RE: THE PLEASANT RECOMPENSE

The suspense was palpable but the delivery was shaky.

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RE: YEMI THE KIND BOY

Too predictable! Children's stories come with good suspense too.

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RE: THE MAID

Needed twists and turns...

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