Dr. Kennedy O. Obohwemu
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RE: MASK

CRITIQUE ON MASK The poem, 'Mask' was written by Alabi Muheez Ajibola. The poem tells of a girl, Bianca, who doesn't look transparent for all to see h...

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RE: WIFE MATERIAL

A good train of thought. For what it is worth, cite external sources of information and properly reference them.

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RE: QUOTE OF THE WEEK

Doubts kills dreams (kill shouldn't have been pluralised).

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RE: UNTIL YOU ARE A VICTIM

Is the definition of victim in the introduction your original idea or was it cited from some external source? Your exposition should be backed by fact...

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RE: NNEKA

A commonly told tale lacking that creative spark. Mind your use of punctuations as well, e.g., 'Nneka dad's friend' should be 'Nneka's dad's friend'.

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RE: How the eclipse was born

Tense usage was rather poor. You repeatedly used 'was' instead of 'were'. And does this story also tell how the dog became king of the animal kingdom?

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RE: SOMEONE ELSE LIKE YOU

A Review of "Someone Else Like You" by Atuanya John. The poem is a story of a lover who mourns the exit of his beloved so much that he doubts the like...

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RE: Friendship

A CRITIQUE ON FRIENDSHIP The poem "Friendship" was written by Anene Ebubechukwu and Ogunmodede Oluwaferanmi in January, 2020. The poets sheds more lig...

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RE: Lost

A Review of "Lost" by Adeola Babawale The poem is a picture of the absurdity of life. It expresses the conditions of the average man. The personae of ...

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RE: WORLD OF ROMANCE

A Review of "World of Romance" by Samuel Junior Irusota. This poem has the ring of those sort of words young lovers tell their partners whom they are ...

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RE: ABOUT US

I would like to add a few thoughts on this assertion by the reviewer: "Poems are not to be prosaic in nature..." Traditionally, poetry and prose are t...

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RE: ABOUT US

A Review of "About Us" by Victoria Ukpaka The personae of this poem recounts the beauty of love shown and received by the personae's lover in the past...

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RE: Sweet Pain

A Review of "Sweet Pain" by Yusuf Muyibat Avosuahi. The personae of this poem takes us into a journey, a journey whose end is the heart. A heart that ...

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RE: LOVELY EVIL

A Review of "Lovely Evil" by Victor Apata. The personae of this poem becomes a recipient of the evil sewn during the personae's youthful days. The per...

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RE: SLEEP MOTHER , SLEEP.

A Review of "Sleep Mother, Sleep" by Alabi Muheez Ajibola The poem is a requiem in honour of the personae's mother. In the poem "Sleep Mother, Sleep" ...

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