Dr. Kennedy O. Obohwemu
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Last seen: Dec 18, 2022
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RE: A Sinful Saint

Great message. Could have been better written though. A reappraisal of elementary rules of grammar would be helpful.

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RE: I Didn't Leave My Children

Great message, marred by structural and grammatical errors.

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RE: Tears

Good title, great delivery!

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RE: Stanzas from Hades

Punctuation error in S1L4: 'Another chance to not by my actions; be late' (the semi-colon should simply be a comma) Capitalization error in S4L1: 'Ala...

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RE: RIGHT OR LEFT?

Deep message! Your use of rhythm is inconsistent though.

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RE: Communication is Key

Message well delivered. But punctuations, paragraphs and capitalizations are not so well knitted in the piece.

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RE: FORGIVENESS

Nice. You quoted a writer without making reference to his name. You should always mention the writer.

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RE: Confessions Of A Child

Posted in the wrong forum. You should have clicked on Week 4 before posting your entry. Please review our contest rules again.

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RE: Left to fate

Good first attempt. Work needs to be edited though. You should also add your full name and the relevant hashtag for the contest. Please revisit our co...

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RE: GOOD OLD DAYS

Work needs to be edited.

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RE: DESIGNED BY LOVE

Work needs to be edited.

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RE: Child Safety At Home

Work is 1,004 words, exceeding the required limit (300-500). A few structural and grammatical errors abound: 1. The boy was said to have drowned in a ...

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RE: Ice Thieves

Be careful with word count limits for literary contests. This work contains 501 words, which is still above required limit (300-500). Use wordcounter....

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RE: Requiem Mass

Work contains 295 words, which is below the required limit (300-500). It's a nice piece, but the conclusion was hasty. You gave it away too easily. Ho...

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RE: UNHOLY MATRIMONY

Welcome back, bro!

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