Edited: "Never mind the raging storm; keep your eyes on hope, let your mouth sing it like a song, till your heart believes it and your mind accepts it...

Nicely written. However, there's defective tense usage. You used the past participle in reference to a past event, which was great, but then you switc...

@monilola You used ABAB in the first stanza, then opted for AABB in the last stanza. And in S2, 'sing' doesn't rhyme with 'rings'. Do you get it?

Good write-up, but work needs to be edited. It also exceeds the required word count limit (300-500 words). Presently, your word count is 1,436!

Hips of washed clothes were carelessly sprawled on the bed (word should be 'heaps'). There are several other similar errors.

You should get your works edited by a professional editor. A review course on the basics of grammar is strongly advised.

The rhyming scheme in S1 didn't follow the pattern in other stanzas. The wordings in the last stanza was simply superb!

Fantastic title by the way...

S1L1, L2 & L3: Sole bleeding miles have I trekked,In search of the silent questionsMy heart sought. You mean 'silent answers'? We seek answers to ...

This is supposed to be a collabo, right? The first one was rather conclusive; it didn't give room for continuity, especially with the way it ended. Th...

It's really not compulsory to use rhythm in poetry. If you must use a rhyming scheme, ensure you stick to a particular pattern.

Nice poem! There are, however, many spelling and grammatical errors.

You didn't cite your references. This leaves you prone to accusations of plagiarism.

Statement is grammatically incorrect. Can you paraphrase?

Tense usage, punctuation errors... In the narrative, you used the past participle pretty well, but turn you frequently switched to the present tense. ...