Last seen: Dec 18, 2022
Nice ?
Why did you choose to start S4 with a capital letter when all others used small letters?
S3L3... "Unto me only my shadow soughts" Doesn't sound right with the last word.
The write-up says 'moon light'...
Above are personal observations. They do not in any way reflect the opinion of the judges.
If you're to use rhythm in your poetry, you have to be consistent...
Great collabo!
A good read...
The last sentences in the 2nd paragraph should be edited: "Its not your fault, the dictionary had no cover and all of the pages are dog-eared. The fir...
Hmmm
This is common knowledge. Try something unique.
A harsh reality for a child, wouldn't you say?
A lesson well learnt... ?
Word count (246) is below the required limit (300-500).
Nice try, but the delivery could have been better...