Great collabo. Posted in the wrong forum though.

Good narrative. But you posted it in the wrong contest category. Word count (581) also exceeds the required limit (300-500).

Beautiful short story. Doesn't quite fit into this contest category, does it?

Nice article; however the word count (801 words) exceeded the limit required for this contest (300-500).

Concord, tense usage... Consider review.

? Haven't I seen this somewhere before?

No full name?

It was also posted in the wrong forum. This isn't the place for collabos.

Not a bad attempt. Word count (805) exceeds the required limit (300-500), so perhaps you'd consider editing the write-up.

Another great collabo. However, word count (707) exceeds the required limit (300-500).

Interesting... Get rid of the punctuation errors when editing the main text...

Flash fiction? Needs a lot of editing, beginning from the title...

Nice collabo. But who's Agape? Is that her real name? Why didn't you include her full name?

Great attempt! You didn't include your full name...

Entry contains 921 words which exceeds the required word count limit (300-500 words).