Dr. Kennedy O. Obohwemu
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RE: APOLOGY TO OUR PARENTS
S4L1: 'Times without number, on every daily basis...' The word 'every' has no business there.
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RE: RESPECT
The first 4 stanzas were on point. You derailed afterwards...
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RE: SERENITY
Is this a first by Zadok? Welcome to ANSA!
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RE: NOWHERE TO RUN
The second stanza appears more striking...
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RE: Apology: Sorry we failed you.
Apology: Sorry we failed you To the darkest nights, sorry we failed you.Even when you watched us kiss passionately Under your gloomy dark world and ...
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RE: LARGE RESULTS IN A LITTLE
Hmmm...
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RE: Apology: Sorry we failed you.
Nice piece. However, tense construction is defective. Needs editing...
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RE: MY PLIGHT, MY POETRY
Hmmm...
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RE: KEY TO MY HEART
Wrong forum...
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RE: TEARS ON THE STREETS
Rich message...
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RE: JUST LIKE THE CHINESE BAMBOO TREE
Nice! The two 'its' in S12L5 should be 'it's'.
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RE: GRANDPA MAX
Nice! The 'of' in S6L1 should give way... ?
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RE: Misconception of bipolar disorder
No citations? No references? The work needs to be edited (spelling errors, punctuations, etc).
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