Last seen: Dec 18, 2022
Lovely free verse!
Nice free verse!
Submitted in the wrong forum.
Interesting...
Good to have an entry for this contest this week. The title is rather incomplete. You should reflect in your title what the report is all about. You a...
Work needs a lot of editing.
Would have been better without the first phrase.
A lot of punctuation errors are evident in this piece. "Stupid man!", the lawyer said as he twisted the steering wheel to one side... This should be: ...
Beautiful narrative! Just a few issues: "I don see...". The full stop at the end of the quotation mark is unnecessary. The correct way to put it is: "...
Good comic relief!
Content was quite graphic. You should issue a 'reader discretion notice' next time.
Work needs to be thoroughly edited.
S4L2: We stood by you and nurture you in our arms (highlighted word should be in the past tense: nurtured) S4L3 and S5L2 The words 'strength' and 'alt...