Well written. A few issues with concord (subject-verb agreement), e.g., S2L3: Lure me into those warm bed (word should be 'that') S2L6:I am only a hei...

Nice thoughts. Just a few issues with concord (subject-verb agreement): S1L1: Darkness has long tarry in my heart (tarried) S2L2: When your face of h...

Fantastic free verse! ??

Nice train of thought. A few issues with tense usage: S2L1: I am that child whose belly sing hymns of hunger (sings) S3L2: as my ship struggle on thi...

Nice, short, deep poem...

If she lets him slip na wetin she gain?? ? ?

Punctuations and capitalizations... Shouldn't the quote end with a full stop? And why does 'Wolves' begin with a capital letter?

A CRITIQUE ON LIFE CONTINUES TO WIN The poem ' Life continues to win' was written in November, 2019 by a renowned, vibrant, young poet Akinwole John A...

Nice poem, too many big words.

Nicely written!

Posted in wrong forum. Please be acquainted with the weekly schedule.

Message well delivered! Be consistent in the use of capitalizations. For example, Papa and Mama should always have the first letters in capitals. Also...

Let me edit the first few paragraphs. My backbone threatened to break as I gingerly lifted and dropped the pan containing a watery mixture of sand and...

Apart from the obvious punctuation errors, there seems to be a disconnect between Elvis' tete-a-tete with Mr. Sam and the latter's dialogue with his m...

Nice piece. It is however littered with punctuation errors and inconsistent use of rhythm.