Mind your tense usage. "I never thought a time will come When I couldn't write a poem..." Should have been: "I never thought a time would come When I...

Have you posted this work somewhere else before?

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Any useful critique?

Don't just praise the poem. Critique it!

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Avoid use of high-sounding, ambiguous words in your poetry. Keep it simple, plain, modest... And avoid abbreviations!

Any critique?

Nice piece. Consider a more niform use of capitalisations...

Touching!

A good reminder to make every moment count... Work on your punctuations and exclamation marks though.

Would have been better with punctuation usage.

Nice title... Lol. You should thank the person who suggested it.

Work should have been properly edited. When submitting a series for Flash Fiction Contest, try give each episode a sub-title.

Nice attempt. However, the following issues need to be handled: 1. Faulty Subject-Verb Agreement 2. Punctuation 3. Wrong use of Compound/Complex S...