The poet carefully painted a picture of two passionate lovers who have their soul and body passionately intertwined. She was able to create a clear me...

Hmmm...

Nicely written. Just a few issues with tense construction... And title should have been phrased, 'Sleep, mother! Sleep!' (Note the use of punctuation ...

S3L3: You should avoid using abbreviations in literary works, assuming your readers know exactly what they mean. S6L3,L4: The word 'hostage' is inapp...

How about the people you care about? Don't they deserve some explanation?

"... the choices is yours..." You mean, "... the choice is yours..."

You should use quotation marks when quoting someone else, eg: "Whatever you can conceive and believe, then you can definitely achieve." Give credit to...

The phrase '...living your life by choice' doesn't sound right, does it?

We would rather entertain prose for this contest category.

We would rather entertain prose for this contest category.

1. Storyline is a little confusing 2. Use spacing to delineate your paragraphs. 3. Your use of exclammation marks are misleading. 4. Capitalisation...

Looks like a good nursery rhyme. You should however use punctuation marks more appropriately. For example, you used full stop many times where the sta...

Nice inspirational poem, but your use of exclamation marks is misleading. Where does the 'letter of advice' begin, and where does it end?

A realistic piece of poetry! Avoid using unnecessary pluralisations, eg 'discomforts' (S1L1).

Nicely written. Just a few issues with tense construction and pluralisations. S2L1: Who is a 'worderman'?