Dr. Kennedy O. Obohwemu
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RE: YOUR ASSOCIATION

Interesting...

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RE: Switch

Interesting...

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RE: LOVE ME OR KILL ME

And if you're submitting an excerpt of the same literary work for different editions of the same contest, try give each excerpt a new title or use rom...

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RE: LOVE ME OR KILL ME

Lovely plot! You just need to work on your tense usage. A few examples: "Harry felt like strangling Martin when he saw Sandra white with shock." Past ...

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RE: Give me my tomorrow today

Ensure you add your full name next time! ??

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RE: Give me my tomorrow today

Wonderful! S2L2: Yes that tomorrow you promised me yesterday S2L3: Yes that tomorrow you said will be better There should be a comma (,) after the w...

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RE: BETRAYAL

Take your time to learn about the following: 1. Subject-verb agreement in a sentence 2. Tense usage

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RE: A HONEY FACE

There are other similar errors in the text.

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RE: A HONEY FACE

Good attempt. However, the work needs to be edited. For example: This assured you I have come to stay (Word should be had) How the world shrink by it ...

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RE: CONTEMPT FOR CONTEMPT

Nicely done! S5L3: 'these' should be 'this' ('All this while', not 'All these while')

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RE: THE STRIKER

Needs a lot of editing. For example, consider the introductory remark: "In the shrine of one of the most renounced chief priest in Utu community..." W...

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RE: LOVE ME, KILL ME

Wow! Harry is dead meat!

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RE: CHEMISTRY

Nice collabo! Few errors, e.g.: S1, L5: 'Why your eyes is so beautiful...' (The word there should be 'are'.) S1L6: 'That it almost look perfect...' (W...

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