Interesting...

Interesting...

And if you're submitting an excerpt of the same literary work for different editions of the same contest, try give each excerpt a new title or use rom...

Lovely plot! You just need to work on your tense usage. A few examples: "Harry felt like strangling Martin when he saw Sandra white with shock." Past ...

Ensure you add your full name next time! ??

Wonderful! S2L2: Yes that tomorrow you promised me yesterday S2L3: Yes that tomorrow you said will be better There should be a comma (,) after the w...

Take your time to learn about the following: 1. Subject-verb agreement in a sentence 2. Tense usage

There are other similar errors in the text.

Good attempt. However, the work needs to be edited. For example: This assured you I have come to stay (Word should be had) How the world shrink by it ...

Nicely done! S5L3: 'these' should be 'this' ('All this while', not 'All these while')

Good!

Needs a lot of editing. For example, consider the introductory remark: "In the shrine of one of the most renounced chief priest in Utu community..." W...

Wow! Harry is dead meat!

Nice collabo! Few errors, e.g.: S1, L5: 'Why your eyes is so beautiful...' (The word there should be 'are'.) S1L6: 'That it almost look perfect...' (W...

Nice tribute!