Dr. Kennedy O. Obohwemu
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RE: The past

Learn the difference between it's and its, and how to use them. "It's great to take a trip down memory lane every once in a while but don't get caught...

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RE: Get tougher

Better this way: When the going gets tough, get tougher at it. Persistence will take you where your complaints won't.

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RE: THE CHANGE WE SEEK OR THE CHANGE WE ARE ?

"Imagine what he/she would do when the state treasury in his care?" There should be 'is' in between 'treasury' and 'in'.

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RE: SEGUN'S MISTAKE

Good narrative, barring a few structural errors. Dialogue is poor, with defective use of punctuation marks.

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RE: MY DEPARTURE

"They were peaceful people, good men and poured all of their lived into what they taught, accompanied by their good works." The word in bold letters s...

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RE: METHINKS

Nicely written. Be consistent with the use of the phrase 'let me' and the word 'lemme'. Avoid the latter entirely in formal writings.

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RE: IF II

S2L1: If love is the Sharp canine of a lion The word 'sharp' doesn't need to begin in capital letters.

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RE: THE CHRONICLE OF A SHIP

S2L4: Like a machine forlorn uncerviced That sounds awkward! Whose idea was that? Maverick's, I suppose?

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RE: MY STAR

Nice poem; needs some editing though.

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RE: Lesson from the Market

Lesson well learnt. Avoid using abbreviations like 'am' in your write-ups. Also learn how to use its and it's.

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RE: My white garment

Great poem, rich message...

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RE: IF

Nice piece, but the 2nd line of virtually every stanza is structurally defective and grammatically incorrect.

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