This is lovely!

Learn the difference between it's and its, and how to use them. "It's great to take a trip down memory lane every once in a while but don't get caught...

Better this way: When the going gets tough, get tougher at it. Persistence will take you where your complaints won't.

"Imagine what he/she would do when the state treasury in his care?" There should be 'is' in between 'treasury' and 'in'.

Good narrative, barring a few structural errors. Dialogue is poor, with defective use of punctuation marks.

"They were peaceful people, good men and poured all of their lived into what they taught, accompanied by their good works." The word in bold letters s...

Nicely written. Be consistent with the use of the phrase 'let me' and the word 'lemme'. Avoid the latter entirely in formal writings.

S2L1: If love is the Sharp canine of a lion The word 'sharp' doesn't need to begin in capital letters.

S2L4: Like a machine forlorn uncerviced That sounds awkward! Whose idea was that? Maverick's, I suppose?

Nice poem; needs some editing though.

Lesson well learnt. Avoid using abbreviations like 'am' in your write-ups. Also learn how to use its and it's.

Nicely written!

Great poem, rich message...

Nice piece, but the 2nd line of virtually every stanza is structurally defective and grammatically incorrect.

Nice! ? ?