Dr. Kennedy O. Obohwemu
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RE: Cuffed

Interesting... You decided to try again?

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RE: Magma of love

Wrong forum? You should have selected May 2019 Week 4.

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RE: TO LOVE YOU

S4L2: In the lullaby of Angelic chants The word angelic shouldn't begin with a capital letter.

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RE: THE EVIL THAT GLARES

Very nice depiction of suicide. I think the title should have been, The evil that glows. Use of the word 'glares' looks ambiguous.

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RE: TO LOVE YOU

Lovely piece! S2L3: Like a poem of divers sort I believe the word should be 'diverse', not 'divers'.

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RE: WHEN GOOD THINGS SAY NO

Word count (773) exceeds the minimum required (350-500).

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RE: WHERE IS UDAKA TODAY?

Names of the villages like Mbani, Ulongwe and Thorki should begin with capital letters.

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RE: A DAWN OF DOOM

Nice reflection... A few errors: "...SPN party still gathered people in masse..." The word there should be 'enmasse', not "in masse".

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RE: RUKAYAT

How sad...

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RE: GRIEVED HEART

You use singular verbs in place of plural verbs and vice versa. It shouldn't be like that. Check S1L4, S2L1 for example.

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RE: wildflower

Really nice! You should use stanzas to delineate the poem.

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RE: I AM A POET

S1L4: Word there should be 'fill', not 'fills'.

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RE: IN YOUR EYES

S3L4: The word there should be 'full', not 'fully'.

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