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TILL ETERNITY COMES

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Zanathro Ogbu
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TILL ETERNITY COMES

My name is Ada and this is not my story. This is rather your story. Yes, A story I write in Second person point of view. The "you". I guess you may have never seen that. It is a story within a story and your story in my story begins...

You left the cafe at about 8 o'clock pm struggling to get home so as to be a good husband to your quiet wife and your bustling 2 sons who are just 4 years. And you drive your lexus through the thick streets of The University. The street brimming with girls of different sizes and curves. You try to keep your head clear. 

" keep driving... Keep driving" You chide yourself.

But then, your car is caught in a traffic jam. Then it happens, you will later cry to the kinsmen who came to settle between you and Nenea, your wife that it was the devil. Well, i wonder if the devil had been the busty girl who rapped gently at the window of your car while you waited at the traffic jam. And you turn slowly and the turn of your head leads to the turn of your hand which turns the knob of your car door that lets her in. 

If the lift she wanted had been the hotel you later took her to, The the devil would had been accused rightly. But she said 5 Zik Avenue and you heard 5 Star hotel Or probably the faint slide of her cool breasts that touched gently down your right hand that night in your car must have blocked your earbuds.

But onwards, you could have been safely back to your wife and family at 10 o'clock pm and live as if nothing happened. But the problem of your life now is me. Because i saw you coming out of the hotel with the busty girl reclining on your arms and laughing into your ears while your hands wrapped smoothly around your waist. But i wouldn't have been a problem if i kept shut. But the greater problem for you now is that i am presently telling this your story before your kinsman who have come to settle the case.

But that is the greatest of your problems. Your greatest problem now is that after this your family life will be shattered and you may never get back on terms with your wife but the slut you enjoyed the night with is still running around, making her money and picking up other of your type who my type will always spy on and tell a tale of, like i am doing now"

OGBU VINCENT CHIEDOZIE

#ANSAShortStoryOfTheWeekContest.


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Zanathro Ogbu
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I just love the creativity i poured into this. It was actually spontaneous!


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