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adeolababawale@gmail.com
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Harmattan
Enemy but a great companion
A dry and Dusty wind, Harmattan sweeps moisture away
Blowing from the Sahara,
The voice of birds in the dull sky

Where art thou?
Oh temperature coefficient

And lush fields turn brown in its' waste
Dust hides the sun's smile
Taking all bright colors away

Oh sunshine
Direct rays
We were warmed by the bright sunshine
We moved out of the shade and into the sunshine
Harmattan scribbles one of the most cherished moments in the World

 

© Babawale Adeola Sarah

 

 


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Dr. Kennedy O. Obohwemu
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You should know when to use capitalisations. In S1L3, the word 'dusty' shouldn't begin with a capital letter. Same with the word 'world' in the last line of S4.


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