Dr. Kennedy O. Obohwemu
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RE: LETTER TO A BROKEN POTTERS FAMILY

Nice, but grammatical & punctuation errors are evident.

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RE: THE gODS ARE NOT TO BLAME

Lol @Israel @Maverick

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RE: Moon's night

Otherwise, this is perhaps the best collabo we've ever had! Screenshot_20190210-102214.png

6 years ago
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RE: Moon's night

Please see attached. Screenshot_20190210-102157.png

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RE: LAMENTATIONS

Destitutes... Expendabilty... Exorbitantly... Bigotry... Keep it simple, bro. Simple, plain, smooth.

6 years ago
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RE: THE LESS PRIVILEGED

Get rid of the grammatical errors...

6 years ago
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RE: The Mystery Of Love

Grammatical errors and questions about originality... Screenshot_20190210-095356.png

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RE: YET ANOTHER FOR ANXIETY

The first few lines were blurry and lacked grammatical accuracy. The last 4 lines, however, were absolutely spot on!

6 years ago
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RE: YET ANOTHER FOR ANXIETY

@Maverick.... You and your lovers... Hmmm! ?

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RE: SHATTERED LOVE

Needed better use of punctuations...

6 years ago
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RE: SHATTERED LOVE

Needed better use of punctuations...

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RE: Your Mouth Will Kill You

A few typos... S2L7 should be "weigh its consequences".

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RE: SLAY MAMA

Lol... All the lazy Nigerian youths!???

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