Nor be small tin ooo...

Hmmm

Hmm... Soldier go, soldier come...

Isn't this meant to be a collabo?

Hmmm

Nice attempt. However, word count (195) is way below the required limit (300-500).

1. Wrong forum. 2. Exceeds word count limit (300-500).

Too similar to De Witt Jones' quote, "Creativity is the ability to look at the ordinary and see the extraordinary." ???

Not trying to paraphrase a popular quote, are you?

"Life doesn't leave us completely stranded. It all depends on how [we] regard the [troubles] that [come] [our] way." This would have been better. ? ...

Well done! However, you posted this in the wrong forum. It's certainly not a collabo, so you should have submitted it in the other forum. Also, word c...

Nice attempt. However, dialogue alone doesn't make a play a play. Please try incorporate other elements.

"It was a drug of confession..." Lol... What on earth is that?

Nice, but piece needs a lot of editing!

Word count (682) exceeds the required limit (300-500).