An interesting dream...

Deep...

Great title!

Beautiful! ?

Yeah, wrong forum.

On point! ??

Hmmm...

Interesting piece, but has structural deficiencies & grammatical errors. And this wouldn't exactly pass for Children's Literature, would it?

Fantastic piece!

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Other structural & grammatical errors are evident...

Try break the poem into stanzas. L7 doesn't sound right...

We remember this Valentine's Day poem... ??

Wow! This is just lovely! ? ?

Hilarious! ? ? ? Try submit in the appropriate forum next time.