Dr. Kennedy O. Obohwemu
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RE: INKLESS JUNE
Interesting...
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RE: MINE IN LOVE
Nice
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RE: THE ANGRY NATURE
Hmmm...
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RE: WAY TO ROME
Nice ?
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RE: Sorrowful Days
Nicely written. Still having issues working those tenses and pluralisations?
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RE: ALUTA CONTINUA
Nice, but work needs to be properly edited.
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RE: ILLFATED
There's plenty room for improvement...
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RE: THE PRINCESS AND THE POOR BOY
It can be better than this...
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RE: Magma of love
Corrections yet to be effected...
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RE: A Warrior's end
S1L4: And in less than five minutes seven enemy soldiers laid dead at the generals (general's) feet
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RE: NOSTALGIA
Perfecto! ? ?
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RE: MINE IN LOVE
S4L4: "...To eat them to satisfaction with fervour." Avoid ambiguous expressions like this. You can, however, insert a comma between 'satisfaction' an...
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RE: SILENT SCREAM
Nice attempt. However, the various storylines could have been more appropriately linked to achieve a seamless flow.
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RE: THIS LIFE...
Message well delivered.
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