All hail the ever reliable Garri! ??

Interesting...

Last stanza was absolutely spot on! ?

Interesting...

Emotional...

Tell them, sister!

The word read appeared three times. The first and last should begin with a small 'r', not capitals.

Well written. Last paragraph: "And until we fight ourselves of it..." Should be: "And until we rid ourselves of it.."

No doubt.

Not bad. ??

Good humour!

A familiar tale, but the narrative was nice.

Well done. Storyline is too familiar though... Structurally, the work needs a lot of polishing.

Lolz... You would have effected the correction in the main write-up.

This is really good!