Creative gesture! ??

S1L1: Let's rewrite our story on (in) the hearts of men.

Your use of pluralisations in the last stanza is defective. E.g.: S7L1: They demand (a) white ties in our black coats (delete the indefinite article '...

Interesting...

Beautiful! You two make a great team! ??

Nice! 2nd paragraph: "The tongue, with how small it is, can unleash fire or call out peace, depending on how an individual uses it. This should correc...

Well said.

Message well delivered.

Good.

Well written!

Good attempt, but it looks a little too gory for your target audience.

Nice prose. But did you do enough research on this? Is it ethical/legal to allow a person with only one kidney serve as a donor?

Interesting... May we advocate for a more suitable title?

A few structural and grammatical errors: 1. "Well, he didn't know he knows how this works..." The 'he' in that statement appeared twice, and it obviou...

S2L2: Rest is the least of those losts (word should be 'losses')