Dr. Kennedy O. Obohwemu
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Last seen: Dec 18, 2022
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RE: MY SUBLIMITY

Creative gesture! ??

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RE: LET US

S1L1: Let's rewrite our story on (in) the hearts of men.

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RE: UNSUNG HEROES

Your use of pluralisations in the last stanza is defective. E.g.: S7L1: They demand (a) white ties in our black coats (delete the indefinite article '...

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RE: I AM IT

Interesting...

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RE: VICTORY

Beautiful! You two make a great team! ??

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RE: THE TONGUE

Nice! 2nd paragraph: "The tongue, with how small it is, can unleash fire or call out peace, depending on how an individual uses it. This should correc...

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RE: YOU CAN

Well written!

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RE: HORROR

Good attempt, but it looks a little too gory for your target audience.

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RE: FOR LOVE

Nice prose. But did you do enough research on this? Is it ethical/legal to allow a person with only one kidney serve as a donor?

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RE: Toxins

Interesting... May we advocate for a more suitable title?

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RE: HELLO

A few structural and grammatical errors: 1. "Well, he didn't know he knows how this works..." The 'he' in that statement appeared twice, and it obviou...

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RE: Unease

S2L2: Rest is the least of those losts (word should be 'losses')

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