Last seen: Dec 18, 2022
Work needs to be properly edited.
Hmmm...
Lol... You'll have to credit me for the assistance. "When you constantly measure yourself up to the standards of others, you obtain a ticket to the la...
Murder... Violence... Bloody assault... These are strong themes! You should avoid them in children's literature.
Needs some editing. E.g.: "Full of frustration, she sat on the floor, having flashbacks of how he never wanted to marry Tunde." (The 'he' there should...
119 words. Not up to the required word count limit (300-500).
Nice! Great title!
Nice!
You should add a 'viewer discretion notice' for works with graphic content.
Oh, this is lovely! I noticed the unique rhyming pattern -- the last syllable in the last line of each stanza rhyme perfectly. Well done! ??
Nice!
Lovely couple! ??
Rich message...
Nice poem. Needs to be edited though. E.g., S1L5: 'Far lesser' should be 'far less'
It could have been better put. How about this: "When you constantly measure yourself up to the standards of others, you obtain a ticket to the land of...