Israelonoruoiza
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Joined: Oct 19, 2018
Last seen: Nov 1, 2023
Last seen: Nov 1, 2023
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RE: WELCOME, OH NEW YEAR
From two Bards! It's has no reason for it to be bad. It's good!??
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RE: BLACKBIRD
It's good! But, the first stanzais lost from the rhymes...☺☺☺
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RE: COUNTING POUNDS
This Huda! So good!
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RE: THE TWISTS AND TURNS IN OUR CITY
See our city!??
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RE: AGONY OF THE POOR
I love this! Broken down to my taste.
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RE: HOW BEAUTY WAS UGLY
That your village need Jesus!???? But, that's truth. Some are clean outside but dirty in their privacy. Great!
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RE: NOT ANOTHER BLOOD BATH
Nice one guys.
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RE: NOT GOOD ENOUGH
This is good! I like poems been broken into stanzas at most 5-6 lines. I feel dizzy when reading poems that are not been broken down. It's good though...
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RE: WHEN I WAS A CHILD
When I was a child, i speak foolishly And act sane....Good
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RE: Masochist Love
I was unable to read I to the end though...??? It's good.
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RE: WHAT IS LOVE?
Nice one my people.
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RE: RAVAGED
Cutting my heart through to set its pace???
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