This is good. Going with rhyme scheme AB,AB, CD,CD....

This is cool.

I have commented on this before.... It was submitted twice I guess... It's cool.

Looking for who? My Sister? Better pack well???

Jeez! It's going well but can't Read it to the end,...???

Jeez! It's going well but can't Rae it to the end,...???

Wow! I love works like this. The rhymes are going cool without hurting the mood. See work 4lines per stanza, it makes me read it sharply. Nice one??

Nice one.... ???

Akoro nini ??

I love this. Against all odds. Above all!

Great!????

I can, i'm serious....Chuckles.

Wow! This is so great.... Kudos!

I'm serious bro.

This isn't good enough, but i think I should just join the train...☺☺☺