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 Thessy007
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Topic starter 27/12/2019 6:00 pm  

Let thy desires be known and it may be granted because hidden desires yields no fruit.

Theresa Shaibu


   
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 Dr. Kennedy O. Obohwemu
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29/12/2019 11:39 am  

Why the choice of the old word 'thy'? You shouldn't combine the old and the new. Choose one and stick with it throughout the quote. Also, the word 'yield' shouldn't have been pluralised.


   
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