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Give me my tomorrow today

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(@e-boo-bae)
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Call me greedy 

Call me foolish 

Call me stupid 

I still don't care 

All I want is my tomorrow today 

 

Give me my tomorrow today 

Yes that tomorrow you promised me yesterday 

Yes that tomorrow you said will be better 

That tomorrow you promised  would see me a great leader 

Give me tomorrow today 

Let me use it and create a new and better tomorrow 

 

I know life is meant to be in stages 

But the same cannot be said of death 

Give me tomorrow today 

For today is in my hands 

But tomorrow might see me in unknown lands 

 

When there exists life there exists hope 

But when life cannot be guaranteed 

Then hope is built on virtual foundations 

Permit me to ask for my tomorrow today

To transform  hope for a better tomorrow 

To prayers of thanksgiving for a perfect today

#ANSAPOETOFTHEWEEK

 


   
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(@penkup)
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Wonderful!

S2L2: Yes that tomorrow you promised me yesterday 

S2L3: Yes that tomorrow you said will be better 

There should be a comma (,) after the word 'yes' in each of the above lines.


   
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(@penkup)
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Ensure you add your full name next time! ?? 


   
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(@ajmaverick)
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Great attempt

am3mm10@ptsolest


   
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(@e-boo-bae)
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? sir thanks 

 


   
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