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 Wada
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FATHERFIGURE

How do I figure out how to be a father figure?
When my "Fat-Dad" has losses his weight, status and vigour.
After my father got fired, he gave up on everything except liquor,
He loses his taste and scent except his stinking odour.

How do I figure how to father a son?
When my "Fa-died" though alive exposed us to scorching sun.
After my father fully retired, he turned fire, burning us became his fun.
He die before he died, we moan before we mourn.

How do I figure how to become an husband material?
When my "Fade-dad" gradually ate up my mum like a merciless bacteria.
After my father got tired, he became more deadly than mosquito, causing malaria.
He left, yet we bear the stigma of this "Carrier"

How do I figure how to become a father figure,
When my father can not father a son,
Nor shelter his wife from the burning Sun.
How do I figure how to be a father figure, when Dad, my only figure was just a figurehead.

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S1L2: When my "Fat-Dad" has losses lost his weight, status and vigour.

Similar errors are apparent throughout the piece.


   
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