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SINCE I FELL IN LOVE WITH A TAILOR

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(@ajmaverick)
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Since I fell in love with a tailor, 

My heart has been sown up, 

Only to beat for her love. 

 

Since I fell in love with a tailor, 

needs have been pressing like iron

but we've overcome every shock. 

 

Since I fell in love with a tailor, 

We've held together the scissors

cutting every evil human off. 

 

Since I fell in love with a tailor, 

Moments and times we have savoured, 

With strength, will and fervour. 

 

Since I fell in love with a tailor, 

People have learnt the art of love

but ours still can't be measured. 

 

© Aj Maverick

am3mm10@ptsolest


   
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(@penkup)
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Can you make this more prosaic?


   
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(@ajmaverick)
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How sire? 

am3mm10@ptsolest


   
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(@penkup)
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Let it be more prose, less poetry.


   
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(@ajmaverick)
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Ok sire 

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