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Stanzas from Hades

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*Stanzas From Hades* 

 

Give me a second chance to get my story straight 

Another opportunity to show the world I can have faith 

To learn how to disregard troubles and a mindset of inner peace create

Another chance to not by my actions; be late

 

I wanted the memories gone 

Was tired, so I put me to the gun 

If only I had told those evil thoughts begone 

I might have for myself a new tale spawn

 

If only I knew being disappointed with me was okay in life 

That it could serve as a spring board not only as a knife 

That the presence of strife 

Was one of the signs that opportunity was ripe

 

Alas, Experience is the best teacher 

But death is life's school closing bell 

In events leading to depression, trouble, despair and the likes editable mistakes are made 

In suicide, the book of one's life is burnt to ash

 

Anene Ebubechukwu Anthony 

#AnsaPoetOfTheWeek


   
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Punctuation error in S1L4:

'Another chance to not by my actions; be late' (the semi-colon should simply be a comma)

Capitalization error in S4L1:

'Alas, Experience is the best teacher' (The 'e' in experience should be in small letters.)

 


   
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