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LETTER TO MY LOVER

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(@samuel-junior-irusota)
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LETTER TO MY LOVER
Dear miss I miss you
Like the morning dew. I love you.
I wish I could write my wrongs right,
Hold you tight
& Cuddle you at night.
I wish I could be by your side,
Hold your hands.
Hug you to the moon
& Walk by your side.
I want to give you the world,
The universe at your feet.
Take you to places you always dreamt to go.
Include me in all the thoughts you think
& all the sweet dreams that you see.
Don’t forget me in your sleep,
With you I always want to be.
Take me along to all those places in your dreams
Wherever you go.
I won’t leave you
Even for a moment,
Is what I always
Want you to know.
© Samuel Junior Irusota

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(@penkup)
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Nice piece. It is however littered with punctuation errors and inconsistent use of rhythm.


   
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