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(@ajmaverick)
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Let your love clear my fright while I draw breath from the earth, 

let your beauty dawn on me while I savour every gaze as my eyes roam yours in wonder. 

 

For I was alone roaming this cold bed, 

an empty house, a place I tossed. 

You only come when the sun blink, 

then into my warmth you graciously sink, 

but last night was terrible with me here alone

until you came with another confession of your love for me. 

 

Your arrival gave departure to sadness and pains, 

they've been my companions in your absence. 

Now, I can let them go without giving them a gaze

they've only waited for your presence. 

 

What lures me to you are not the firmness of your breasts

nor the dauntless dances of your rear end. 

But your heart that's like a strong rock, 

a distinctive feature separating you from all. 

 

Let me tell the sun to shut its rays

and the moon to shut its light. 

My world still will not fall on its face,

for your eyes replace darkness with light. 

 

 Aj Maverick et Muyibat Avosuahi

This topic was modified 6 years ago by Ajmaverick

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S5L4: 'for your eyes replaces darkness with light.' 

The word there should be replace, not replaces.


   
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