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(@poetpaul)
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TO LOVE YOU

I choose to love you with my poetry
With the spell of each word
And the enchantment of each noun

I choose to laud you, 
with distinct letters
Like a poem of divers sort

I choose to make an imagery
Of how bright you color my heart
With the warmth of your priceless care

I choose to love you loudly
In the lullaby of Angelic chants
By the humor of your countenance charms

I choose to dare my feelings to your care
And by no reason would I have a tear
For you safely rid my soul of all fear

I choose to love you truly
With the eloquent lips of poetry
For to love you is to love myself dearly

© Ganiyu Taofeek
#AnsaPoetOfTheWeek


   
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(@penkup)
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Lovely piece!

S2L3:

Like a poem of divers sort

I believe the word should be 'diverse', not 'divers'.


   
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(@penkup)
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S4L2:

In the lullaby of Angelic chants 

The word angelic shouldn't begin with a capital letter.


   
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