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(@ajmaverick)
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Let me create a picture of you in my heart, 

the only place we can smile together 

and be happy for a while. 

Let me create a picture of you in my heart

and in that luxury, be glad and forget my strife. 

 

Let me create a memory of you

and enjoy the oppression of the dejavu. 

Let me build a castle, mammoth and beautiful

that it can only contain me and you. 

 

Let me create a utopia in my heart, 

With the chords of our love struck. 

And all thoughts we bear be merged, 

even before the mighty gods. 

 

Lemme create a memory that resounds the rebounds of our love after it hit a nadir

which, stripped it naked of the mighty synergy

our hearts needed to attain the peak of it's beginning. 

I hide behind that memory with regret, 

like a highly-sought maiden who has been robbed of the treasures beneath her skirt. 

 

Lemme create an image of you in my heart, 

The only place you ever existed. 

Let me make you in my heart a vine

that grows the wine that forces out of me a ravenous thirst. 

 

Let me create a memory of you, 

while you lie with your arms around me. 

Let me create a memory of you, 

With your body receiving the smooth  vibrations of my heartbeat.

 

On this euphoria, will I smile heartily

For such a great victory, 

Having you and me coming to agree, 

Even if it were not reality. 

 

Lord! May no one fall in love

if it's cheap price thay can not pay. 

May no one fall in love

so we can always have a happy day. 

 

© Aj Maverick 

am3mm10@ptsolest


   
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Nicely written. Be consistent with the use of the phrase 'let me' and the word 'lemme'. Avoid the latter entirely in formal writings.


   
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