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25/03/2019 9:17 pm
The stinging on the left of my face
Accompanied
with occasional throbs.
Pricked continuously in the same place.
Even blinking my eye as well hurts,
yet
same with opening my eyes. There’s pain
always, regardless of what one does.
Man, as I am, is doomed to despair,
Desperately
to sadness he is clinched.
Discomfort,
life’s true nature ‘tis clear.
Futility excludes none,the fiend.
Still,
effort.
To try is first instinct.
Adrenaline will course, replace blood.
Forced, I react at will
muscles twitch.
To do nothing is to be a dud.
Consequence, actions come with no hints.
They come
in season.
A flower’s bud.
© Shodayo Erioluwadamiloju (brownie_vocal)
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Brownie_Vocal
30/03/2019 10:48 am
Why not split it into stanzas?