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Apology: Sorry we failed you.

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Israelonoruoiza
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Apology: Sorry we failed you.

To the Darkest nights, sorry we failed you.
Even when you watched us kissed passionately
under your gloomy dark world and profess our love.
It was later a waste, the time you watched us were wasted times.

To the poetry world, sorry we failed you.
When we steal every best of your lines
to express the moments of our pleasures
and love, this is our ending, we failed your beautiful stanzas.

To friends, sorry we failed you.
For dashing us your trust and all
your efforts for this ship, it never end well.
Alas, it sink.

To our memories, sorry we failed you.
We hope you heal so fast, of the pains
you went through to put a smile on our faces.
We never existed, we're just a mere myth.

To all that we hurt, sorry we failed you.
Even to every wine we drank on lone nights
To every words that came out of our mouth
To every walk we had together, we failed you all.
We didn't make it, the promised land was too far.

To nature, it was never a love.
It was just a nature's condition,
But we thought it was love, but never was.
Sorry we failed you.

©Israel Onoruoiza
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(@penkup)
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Nice piece. However, tense construction is defective. Needs editing...


   
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Apology: Sorry we failed you

 

To the darkest nights, sorry we failed you.
Even when you watched us kiss passionately 
Under your gloomy dark world and profess our love.
It was later a waste, the time you watched us were wasted times.

To the poetry world, sorry we failed you.
When we stole the best of your lines 
To express the moments of our pleasures
And love, this is our ending, we failed your beautiful stanzas.

To friends, sorry we failed you.
For dashing us your trust and all 
your efforts for this ship, it never ended well.
Alas, it sank.

To our memories, sorry we failed you.
We hope you heal so fast, of the pains 
You went through to put a smile on our faces. 
We never existed, it was just a myth.

To all that we hurt, sorry we failed you.
Even to every wine we drank on lone nights
To every word that came out of our mouth
To every walk we had together, we failed you all.
We didn't make it, the promised land was too far.

To nature, it was never a love.
It was just a nature's condition, 
We thought it was love, but never was.
Sorry we failed you.


   
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Israelonoruoiza
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Thank you very much sir.


   
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