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11/03/2019 3:33 am
Passion is Predominant
Everyone in the universe have a passion ,
It may be studying or just fashion.
Passion may be studying a lesson,
Or studying in a session.
Life must be good ,
Person should become successful he should .
Some people might fulfil their goals alone ,
Some do nothing just stick to smartphone.
Someone just show off,
Others watching them just got their mood off .
Those who have achieved none ,
For people they become source of fun.
Hardworking in right field ,
Produces necessary high yield,
Protects our destiny just like shield.
-Sahaj Sabharwal
-Jammu city,
Jammu and Kashmir, India.
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Sahaj Sabharwal
13/03/2019 3:45 pm
Well done, Sahaj. There are still structural deficiencies... And it's not compulsory to use rhythm in your poetry to achieve a desired effect. Just make it simple.