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[Solved] PASSION IS PREDOMINANT

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(@sahaj-sabharwal)
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Passion is Predominant
 
Everyone in the universe have a passion ,
It may be studying or just fashion.
 
Passion may be studying a lesson,
Or studying in a session.
 
Life must be good ,
Person should become successful he should .
 
Some people might fulfil their goals alone ,
Some do nothing just stick to smartphone. 
 
Someone just show off,
Others watching them just got their mood off .
 
Those who have achieved none ,
For people they become source of fun. 
 
Hardworking in right field ,
Produces necessary high yield, 
Protects our destiny just like shield.  
 
-Sahaj Sabharwal
-Jammu city,
Jammu and Kashmir, India.
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(@penkup)
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Well done, Sahaj. There are still structural deficiencies... And it's not compulsory to use rhythm in your poetry to achieve a desired effect. Just make it simple.


   
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