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WHEELS OF LOVE

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Israelonoruoiza
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WHEELS OF LOVE

Love is a session that never passes
its moments are of endless feelings
How hearts come to merge, pure magic
Like ending a war with the wave of fingers

Love is a sinker, it sinks hearts into depth
Its depth is like a deep ocean
Feelings are its only remedy
Not even the strongest can save

When we took the wheels of love
We'd promised to ride to utopia
Our hearts, the merriest in the world
Until our ship crashed against the iceberg

We're taken too far by love's wheel
That not even our promises could breach
Our eyes could see the promise land
What came up? Our sight are fading

Fading sight, waning strength
Bowing hearts, sapping love
Hatred knocking on the doors of our heart
Shall we let it in or pick up our ills?

Let our heart brace itself
Let it not hearken to the call of hatred
We then continue with the journey
Love's wheel ain't wearied yet.

©Aj Maverick et Israel Onoruoiza
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Very deep! ?? 

Note the use of capitalizations (S1L2). 'Promise land' should be 'Promised Land' (S4L3).


   
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