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 huda
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When you love the ones with all your crystal clear heart and in return there is only a bunch of sharp edged thorns
Love is a cure to poisonous hearts but i guess nature has bestowed few of the best lones
With all the colours and shades of different roses ,humans too are of infinite emotions and vulnerable souls
Love can't be define as it is the way of living a life but letting it disperesed in the air
Such an unfortunate beings are those full of hatred when loving is so contentious
Love can't be filled with contamination but can absorb and burst into  pure flames of affection
We all are having heart and we all are same in the way we breath so how can one harm oneself
Loving is the sinking of deep into ocean where  undesirable feelings grow with almost breathless beeps
Without knowing or knowingly harmed we all existed in the world full definite and overwhelming blessing called LOVE and somehow survived the gliding magma...

©Huda Tariq

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A beautiful prosaic poem, barring a few grammatical errors:

'Love can't be define as it is the way of living a life but letting it disperesed in the air
Such an unfortunate beings are those full of hatred when loving is so contentious'

The italicized words should be corrected.


   
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