Notifications
Clear all
Week 2
2
Posts
2
Users
0
Reactions
509
Views
Topic starter
08/07/2019 10:33 pm
*I KNOW OF AN ANGEL*
I know of an angel,
Her complexion makes me think of the native name--- Aponbepore.
Her eyes shine like the sun,
And her smile can heal a broken heart in seconds.
I know of an angel,
Pulchritudinous and calm in words;
Her presence fills one's heart with joy,
The scent that emanates from her is like pomegranate.
I know of an angel,
No adjective to convey who she is;
Soft in words,
Fragile in heart.
I know of an angel,
An atta-girl she is;
Why our eyes lock at the same time,
I still ponder to know
Victor Apata
©Vikjtaar
#ANSAPoetOfTheWeekContest
14/07/2019 2:00 pm
Well scripted. Try avoid big words like 'pulchritudinous' and 'pomegranate'. Keep it simple and plan, yet elegant.