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I KNOW OF AN ANGEL

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(@vikjtaar)
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*I KNOW OF AN ANGEL*

I know of an angel,
Her complexion makes me think of the native name--- Aponbepore.
Her eyes shine like the sun,
And her smile can heal a broken heart in seconds.

I know of an angel,
Pulchritudinous and calm in words;
Her presence fills one's heart with joy,
The scent that emanates from her is like pomegranate.

I know of an angel,
No adjective to convey who she is;
Soft in words,
Fragile in heart.

I know of an angel,
An atta-girl she is;
Why our eyes lock at the same time,
I still ponder to know

Victor Apata
©Vikjtaar
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(@penkup)
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Well scripted. Try avoid big words like 'pulchritudinous' and 'pomegranate'. Keep it simple and plan, yet elegant.


   
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