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(@ajmaverick)
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RADIANT 

The sun brings light 

In the day, shining bright. 

Nature turns sharply with haste 

When she meets the sun's gaze

Its rays are beautiful, 

Radiant, looking like you. 

 

While the sun emits light rays

Lighting up the earth

And comes with it a new day

Shining everywhere 

Giving chance to those who make hays, 

Before it sets. 

Afterwards, going to take a rest, 

Far in the west. 

 

While you emit amity,

Bud camaraderie.

purging many hearts, 

Turning them white,

Like the luring snow, 

We struggle to see from our window.

 

 

The sun pales in comparison to you 

Tho she's as beautiful as you 

Her effects are only ephemeral 

Unlike you, whose presence give exuberance. 

am3mm10@ptsolest


   
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(@ajmaverick)
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Posted by: Ajmaverick

RADIANT 

The sun brings light 

In the day, shining bright. 

Nature turns sharply with haste 

When she meets the sun's gaze

Its rays are beautiful, 

Radiant, looking like you. 

 

While the sun emits light rays

Lighting up the earth

And comes with it a new day

Shining everywhere 

Giving chance to those who make hays, 

Before it sets. 

Afterwards, going to take a rest, 

Far in the west. 

 

 You emit amity,

You bud camaraderie.

purging many hearts, 

Turning them white,

Like the luring snow, 

We struggle to see from our window.

 

 

The sun pales in comparison to you 

Tho she's as beautiful as you 

Her effects are only ephemeral 

Unlike you, whose presence give exuberance. 

Aj Maverick 

 

 

am3mm10@ptsolest


   
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Israelonoruoiza
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Ooop!

It's good.


   
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(@ajmaverick)
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Thanks

am3mm10@ptsolest


   
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