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(@invictus)
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A nightmare disguised as a daydream,
A shunt of expectations and a glimmer of hope,
False hopes barely covering nudity,
It's a see through.

Confidence cool and hot as steam,
Climbing the walks of despair on a slope,
An obscurity barely showing clarity,
It's a see through.

Aspirations showing only a gleam,
With a darkness shallow in scope,
A faith barely showing dignity,
It's a see through.

Unpredictable like the tides of a stream,
Her extremities,one can't cope,
An oasis of positivity,
It's a see through.

©Ikpeme kanong

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(@maynah)
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Great symbolism ?


   
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(@penkup)
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Unconventional use of rhythm... Nice! 


   
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(@ajmaverick)
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Great  one sire! 

am3mm10@ptsolest


   
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