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(@abeladive)
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I have seen the light 

My darkness cannot comprehend 

Like a vampire

I was invited in by a stronger force 

I love, I fear, I dare

The confluence of right and wrong

Morality is a bitch

My beats paused, yet 

Raising faster than a train

A train with the speed of light 

 

How did I get here?

How did we get here?

I came, I saw, I faltered? 

What other proof is needed

When my heart no longer pumps blood?

What's my gain? 

What's my pain?

 

Touch my chest, feel my heart 

Kept stilled by the force of your magnet

Touch my body, feel my soul

The thought of you permeates

I love you, you love me, we love us

The battle line is drawn 

Not on sand

To be blown away by the breath of air

But on two hearts 

To be made one by a fierce dart.

 

©Abel Adive and Emmanuella Zicham
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This topic was modified 6 years ago by AbelAdive

   
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(@ajmaverick)
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Great duet

am3mm10@ptsolest


   
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(@penkup)
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S1L9: 'Raising' should be 'racing'.

S3L2: 'Kept stilled' should simply be 'Stilled'


   
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