Magical Pit
It was a day to remember she was swirling around in her thoughts of having a true love and just right then a young yet mysterious soul looked at her, she felt something deep down and seems like she found one.
He used to follow her wherever she goes as if he can't even breathe unless he sees her. And the most interesting part is she knows who's following her... The one she always dreamt of but it was still a mystery as following her was not enough because she has gone far and wanted more of him...
But the magic of him and mystery made her curious she tried all the possible doors to enter...
He thought he was smart enough to never let her know of what he's up to...As he was just a mystery which never or ever can be understood but nature helped her and soon she realized that she's following an unanswered path...
So she finally approached him and was near to her never-ending grief ...
She innocent and true fell for someone who never really took her serious but enjoyed the true magic love of hers...
She was magic and him just a mystery...
It all ended as she digs a magical pit and herself fell into it with unknown feelings and infinite questions buried inside...
How unfortunate he -the mystery is ...if he could ever know what he just has lost ahhh...
Love is magic that doesn't need any unsaid and unsatisfied feeling as a mystery ... A mystery is simply an excuse to which magic of love has always conquer ...
And she lived as magical as she was with leaving behind the mystery which remained as useless and disappointing as the mystery itself ...
Love and to be loved is a great blessing indeed but for the weak, it's only a pleasure of timely please ...
Love is for the roaring ones not for the trembling leaking souls.
© Huda Tariq
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Nice attempt, but wrought with structural & grammatical errors.
Work should be thoroughly edited.
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