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"Lie down flat!" a huge man on a black mask, with a pistol said, as he pointed the gun at the trembling Mr Adele.

"Please, don't kill me. Don't kill my family," he pleaded, sweating profusely, as three other armed men hit his wife and Dorris, their daughter, who raced out of the room in tears.

"Will you shut up?!" he threw a punch at Mr Adele.

"Ahh," Mrs Adele cupped her mouth as tears streamed down her face. "Please, be merciful," she laid flat, holding the leader's leg, as her daughter joined up.

The man scanned both, then glanced at the other men with a smug smile on his face. "Make love to them."

"Oh, no! Please!" Mr Adele protested, rising up.

Before he could stand on his knees, he was on his forehead. He fell like a tree cut down by a feller buncher as blood flowed freely like a flowing river.

I, Pat, the last born of the family, watched the scene from behind the curtains; I was just five years old. I covered my mouth with one hand as they raped Mom and Sister DorrisVictor
ath. Hot tears ran down my cheeks, I couldn't sniff.

As soon as they left, I went closer to the lifeless bodies, called out their names, but none answered me. I was made an orphan!

Twenty years later, I became an assassin. Little did I know I had been working for the killers of my parents for two years, until I was told to rape one of the two daughters of the family of Roland at an operation. I declined, because the past event played back in my head. I vowed never to rape a girl.

"How dare you? When I order, you comply! It's been twenty years since I ordered my boys to rape. We raped Mr Adele's wife and daughter to death. Why can't you now?"

Beads of sweat stood out on my face, my lips parted and shook uncontrollably, I had been in search of the killers for long. I got out my gun from my back pocket, and shot the three bastards on their foreheads. The devil that was hidden in me got unleashed at the appointed time.

I broke down in tears, satisfied with the mission accomplished, then pointed the gun to my head. It was a dream.

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Nice storyline. Punctuation & capitalisation errors are apparent, however.


   
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